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   Did you know on Wednesday we had a special visitor called  Paul martin he created the story of Kory the kiwi and Bert the gecko. He used to play for the Waikato chief he handed out books to kids that brought their own.He went to each class he told us he liked to sketch with ink pen.

We were so lucky to meet a real comic art author. He said that our school was the first Auckland primary he has ever been to.He said his son loves to sing like us.    

He made his story in two years and he went to lot’s of places he had two sons one was fifteen, and the other son was eleven.He loved rugby reading and drawing.We sang him a Maori song before he went.

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START WRITING HERE: On Wednesday we had a special visitor called  Paul martin he created the story of Kory the kiwi and Bert the gecko he used to play for the Waikato chief he handed out books to kids that brought their own.He went to each class he told us he liked to sketch with ink pen.

He made his story in two years and he went to lot’s of places he had two sons won was fifteen and the other son was eleven.He loved rugby reading and drawing.We sang him a Maori song before he went.

WALT:Today we have to write a recount about paul martin

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WALT:This week we are learning abut paul martin

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WALT:This week we are learning about superhero

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Planning:	Your Thoughts and Answers:
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?	At the end.
Hero:	fire boy
Villain:	Rock head.
Other Characters (if any):	People,brother
Hook:	Ka-pow,boom,bang,slice.whak
Problem:	Rock head threw fire boy’s brother.
Solution:	Rock head once to kill fire  boy because he once
	To become stronger
If beginning, what could happen next?	Fire boy brother was playing rugby with his friend’s.
If ending, what happened before this scene?	Rock head fighting lava boy.

Start Writing Here:Once upon a time there lived a boy called Sam but when he say’s KA-POW he becomes fire boy.Fire boy has a brother called Jake.Jake has four friend they were playing rugby when a evil villain called rock head Jake and his running for his life in till rock head telaported to him and said I'm going to grip your bones for my breakfast.Then he threw Jake of a cliff when Sam saw his brother falling and the he said KA-POW and transformed into fire and flew to rescue and put him to safety when they landed safely rock head burst into anger and ran to attack  then fire boy sliced rock head’s hand of but it wouldn't work because he was to strong.Rock head punched fire boy far away and the he grabbed  Jake on the neck and choked him.Suddenly out of know where fire boy speed punch came and punched rock head to the ground and made a loud bang noise.Then fire boy did one of his dangerous moves and melted rock head to black steam.Fire boy went to his brother and gave him a big hug  AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER:THE END

WALT: this year we a learning about comic art