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WALT: This week we are learning about comic art and we have to make our own superhero

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Dictogloss

I will be reading a text to you three different times.  Make sure that you are listening carefully.  Pay special attention to where you believe punctuation (full stops, commas, question marks, quotations) should go.

Reading #1: Just listen.  

Reading #2: Take notes.  Then, with a partner, use your notes to rewrite the text that was read to you.

Reading #3: Take notes again, but this time listen carefully for things you missed in your reconstruct.

Team leader America and the amazing teacher venger are fighting a new villain the super villain is as strong as an ox and as fast as a cheater he wears a deep purple cape and a sparkly green face mask to hide the hideous scar that cover half of his face he is a ninja warrior crawling around at night often leaving behind empty K.F.C  boxes.

today we learned about comic book.

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Dictogloss

I will be reading a text to you three different times.  Make sure that you are listening carefully.  Pay special attention to where you believe punctuation (full stops, commas, question marks, quotations) should go.

Reading #1: Just listen.  

Reading #2: Take notes.  Then, with a partner, use your notes to rewrite the text that was read to you.

Reading #3: Take notes again, but this time listen carefully for things you missed in your reconst Now that you have listened to the text three

Superman the most powerful beam in the universe an alien from kilow  from the planet krypton that was raised to become an american superhero.He use;s strength speed flight. In his civilian identity called clark. He is a founding member  of the justice league of american

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answered	around	colour	cute
delightedly	extreme	eyes	food
garage	have	kitten	know
looking	luckily	meal	mixture
multicolour	play	weak

                  Tim’s pride

My cat polly had six kitten last night.

Where did she have them asked jane.

Luckily she found a box under  the workbench

In the garage  and had them in there.Answered tim

How did you know she had them then asked steve

She didn't come for her meal last night delightedly  situation

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                Dear Ted

It is me your best friend harry I was wondering if your family is your family it is autumn here  and there is a beautiful ocean over here I hope you are safe.

   From your dear friend harry.

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Dictogloss

I will be reading a text to you three different times.  Make sure that you are listening carefully.  Pay special attention to where you believe punctuation (full stops, commas, question marks, quotations) should go.

Reading #1: Just listen.  

Reading #2: Take notes.  Then, with a partner, use your notes to rewrite the text that was read to you.

Reading #3: Take notes again, but this time listen carefully for things you missed in your reconstruct.

Now that you have listened to the text three times, use your notes to reconstruct the text below. Bang the door slams as I fall in the house.The whooshing of the wind can be heard through the wall.Clink clink  clink hail begins to  fall against the windows making  my head spin.If only I wasn't

Alone.Crash hello is anyone there?” I call into the darkness.When all of a sudden Mums spotted cat comes tearing across the kitchen floor  into my arms.purr purr I'm glad I have someone is home to great me.

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Recount: Immersion Assembly

WALT: Write a recount using an amazing hook and detailed orientation.

Step 1: Brainstorm

Use the graphic organiser below to brainstorm what you remember about the

assembly.

Step 2: Organise

Use the graphic organiser to help you to organise your thoughts before you

begin writing.

Step 3: Write It!  

Begin writing your rough draft below.  Remember to use:

1. transition words: 2. past tense: 3. first person:

First, At first, went I

Next, Initially, saw We

Soon, Once we, painted Our

During, Once I, clapped My

After, At last, danced

Later, Finally, drew

Immersion Assembly Term 2

On Monday we went to Immersion assembly that means when all the  teacher show their video. When it was team 4 it was cool because their video was about superhero the bad guy was bear bextine he went into the classroom and stole bobby John net book.

Suddenly two superhero saw bear bextine they went to stop him but they failed to stop him.When the teacher venger saw bear bextine and they won the fight.

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                dictogloss

did you know that Mt Wellington  is actually a volcano?Mt Wellington was formed by an  eruption over 10,00 years ago and has been dormant (sleeping) since.Mt Wellington is the name of the suburbs in Auckland where the mountain of lives.Other suburbs that surround Mt Wellington are Stone fields, Panmure, Tamaki,Penrose and Ellerslie. Mt Wellington is about 135m in height, and you can walk or drive up the mountain

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                              fiafia

Last Thursday night the whole school went to the point England Fiafia I was in the circus circus what you have to do is just do jump’s but on your free time you get to do a flip if you want to.At Fiafia it was cool because we watched all the amazing dances and there was lots of yummy food to eat.

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Volcano Narrative: Hook

We have been discussing how to HOOK your reader in your opening paragraph.  Now, let’s try it out using the narrative you wrote in class about the two volcanoes!  

1. The type of hook that I am going to use is:

2. Copy and paste the first paragraph of your narrative below.  Then, in a different colour font, change the beginning of your paragraph using the hook you chose above.

START WRITING HERE: Once upon a time in a   far away land there was a iland could the no name  the no name island is could no name because in 1872 there was two old volcanoes that had no name  that's why it was could no name island.

The to volcano with the no name was a strange looking volcano because it looked like it was a human statue because it was a tall volcano it never erup.It just erupt in 1890 it did the bigest erupt in the world.

The  two no name volcano stopped erupting in 1985 the  maori people  went to the island to check out the two volcano then the maori people named  the two volcano.The first volcano was could the god of the lava and the second volcano was could god of the sea.

3. Click to Make an Appointment to see Mrs. Moala to discuss the changes you have made.  Once your changes have been ok’d, go on to steps 4 and 5.

STOP!! Do not go to Step 4 until Mrs. Moala tells you to.

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4. Copy and paste your new “HOOKed” paragraph and post it on your blog. Title your post HOOKS in Narrative Writing Don’t forget to use labels like:

Writing, Narrative, Mrs. Moala, Writing, 2016, Team 4

5. Don’t forget to tell your blog readers what you have done above your narrative paragraph!  For example: DO NOT COPY THIS!!

This week in writing, I have been learning to HOOK my readers by using different HOOK strategies in my writing.  I have taken my volcano narrative and spent some time working to add a new HOOK in the opening sentences.  The HOOK I have chosen to try is:    

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