On Monday we went to Motat. At Motat it was very cool the best thing I like about Motat was the maze. When I was in the maze I got lost.The maze has mirrors .When I was walking in the maze i got hit by one of the mirrors. When I finished going to the maze I went to the old phones.The phone were very dum because I couldn't here anyone.
Criteria for an Effective Paragraph
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Par 1
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Par 2
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Par 3
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Par 4
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Par 5
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⚈ Start with a topic sentence.
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⚈ Have at least 2-3 connected sentences.
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⚈ Have sentences that are effective that
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b. have juicy vocab e.g action/describing words
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(c) grammatically correct
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(d) punctuated correctly.
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(Think of 1 or 2 things that you need to to focus on next time, to make sure your paragraphs are effective.)
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Next time I need to have varied and juicy vocab
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